Kenji
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Post by Kenji on Jun 16, 2011 10:44:15 GMT -7
Formal Name
: Mohawk
Informal Name: Mo
Breed: Mexican Grey Wolf
Age: 7 months
Fur Color: My fur is black and I have a white mark on my forehead.
Eye Color: Brown
Gender: Male
Paired To: Can I add this later? xD
Personality: I trust my emotions more then I trust my thoughts which is why I get in so much trouble, I prefer to be treated good and so thats how I treat others though I do tend to get in a bad mood sometimes depending on what is going on. I love to explore and can be found exploring the nearby territory without fear, I tend to trust more then I do distrusting.
Sample Post:
It was just after sunrise and mom told me that she was going out hunting and that she would be back later that evening and just like any other pup I was plain excited, who could resist such a chance to explore the territory? He couldn't thats for sure and he didn't know anyone who would just stay back and ignore this awesome chance to explore!
I waited till I knew mom was far off and crept out of the den with my black tail wagging softly, I was so very excited for this chance and couldn't wait to see how many new friends I would make on my journey and hoped that I would make it back before mom got home.
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Post by ` k i w i ` on Jun 20, 2011 8:40:58 GMT -7
Good, good! I only see that you need to add his age. I also took note of a few run on sentences, but no worries, after RPing with us for a bit, you'll get your structure and flow up to par!
Don't worry about the run-on's, they are fine. Just remember to reread your posts and make sure your words are ordered and you don't leave straggling sentence ends! Just add the age and you'll be ready to go!
If darkerfirebeast ever gets to showing up regularly again, I'll probably pair you with her Draco fellow, is that okay?
your character count: 1/5
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Kenji
New Member
[Mo0:3][0:Busy me][1:Am here and ready for action!][C01:006600]
Posts: 5
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Post by Kenji on Jun 20, 2011 9:09:01 GMT -7
Sure thats fine  |
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Post by ` k i w i ` on Jun 20, 2011 11:30:08 GMT -7
Okay! You are good to go! If you want to start right away, PM me with the answers to the following questions: Would you like to RP with me? Do you want to RP with my female or male wolf?
Remember, you can have up to 5 characters, and two open threads per character, equaling up to 10 open threads. And in-character posts need to be 300 words! It's kinda hard for me sometimes, but once you get into the swing of it, you'll be fine!
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